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lilqtny
-Crossfit & pitbull addict
Member since 7/06 2830 total posts
Name: Tracy
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Will somebody proofread this please
Help us start a chain reaction…..
Rachel Scott was one of the students tragically lost on April 20, 1999 at Columbine High School. She was an amazing young woman who somehow always knew she would touch many lives. Through her journals, friends, and family we know that she did effect many people. Unfortunately, she didn’t live to know just how many more she would touch. In her honor and the honor the other 12 who were lost on that day, we, the seventh grade students at Udall Road Middle School, proudly present Udall’s Challenge. Our “challenge” is to get as many members of the community to participate in Rachel’s Challenge as possible. We are asking that you read the challenges below and sign our “links” promising that you will fulfill them. These links will be joined together to form an unbreakable chain of kindness in our school and community.
1. Eliminate prejudice by looking for the best in others 2. Choose positive influences and role models in life 3. Keep a daily journal or diary 4. Look for the little things that can make a BIG difference 5. Express positive affection to family and friends consistently
TOGETHER, WE CAN START A CHAIN REACTION To lean more about Rachel’s Challenge go to www.rachelschallenge.com
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Posted 6/26/07 9:39 PM |
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JustJack
:)
Member since 2/06 2041 total posts
Name: J
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Re: Will somebody proofread this please
of the honor...put the of in there
Message edited 6/26/2007 9:44:21 PM.
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Posted 6/26/07 9:44 PM |
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lilqtny
-Crossfit & pitbull addict
Member since 7/06 2830 total posts
Name: Tracy
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Re: Will somebody proofread this please
OMG thanks
I didn't catch that and I read this a million times over!!
Thanks again
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Posted 6/26/07 9:46 PM |
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JustJack
:)
Member since 2/06 2041 total posts
Name: J
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Re: Will somebody proofread this please
no prob!
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Posted 6/26/07 9:47 PM |
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MissJones
I need a nap!
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Re: Will somebody proofread this please
Posted by lilqtny
Our “challenge” is to get as many members of the community to participate in Rachel’s Challenge as possible.
I would change it to "...get as many members of the community as possible to participate...
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Posted 6/26/07 11:26 PM |
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lilqtny
-Crossfit & pitbull addict
Member since 7/06 2830 total posts
Name: Tracy
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Re: Will somebody proofread this please
Thanks Miss. Jones!!
That does sound better!!
Message edited 6/27/2007 8:07:01 AM.
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Posted 6/27/07 8:06 AM |
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browneyedgirl
family is all that matters
Member since 6/06 6513 total posts
Name: browneyes
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Re: Will somebody proofread this please
it's "affect", not effect
effect is a noun, affect is a verb
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Posted 6/27/07 5:56 PM |
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lilqtny
-Crossfit & pitbull addict
Member since 7/06 2830 total posts
Name: Tracy
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Re: Will somebody proofread this please
thanks browneyed, I actually caught that one and was I did a full lesson on that.
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Posted 6/27/07 6:02 PM |
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