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CaseyGirl
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Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Ending a sentence with a preposition, such as:
You have a beautiful school that I would love to be a part of.
How can I rephrase this!!??
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Posted 8/23/06 2:25 PM  |
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twobabies
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
I would love to be part of your beautiful school.
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:26 PM |
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LadyMaravilla
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Sonia
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Posted by MrsTC
Ending a sentence with a preposition, such as:
You have a beautiful school that I would love to be a part of.
How can I rephrase this!!??
I would love to be part of the beautiful school you have.
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:26 PM |
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MrsPorkChop
Twinning!!
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Missy
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
I would love to be a pert of your beautiful school
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It would be an honor to be a member of your beautiful school community.
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM |
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CC0203
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Christina
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Posted by twobabies
I would love to be part of your beautiful school.
I agree 
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM |
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Goldi0218
My miracles!
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Leslie
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Posted by MrsTC
You have a beautiful school that I would love to be a part of.
I would enjoy the opportunity to be a part of your wonderful program (school, etc.)
Message edited 8/23/2006 2:29:12 PM.
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM |
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CaseyGirl
Mommy to 3 Boys :)
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Jen - counting my blessings...
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
thanks!!! 
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM |
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nov04libride
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.
I would say something like
I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:28 PM |
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Goldi0218
My miracles!
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Posted by nov04libride
I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.
I would say something like
I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.
That is exactly why I wrote what I wrote.
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:29 PM |
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Crismicka
How did I get so lucky
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Posted by twobabies
I would love to be part of your beautiful school.
yes
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| Posted 8/23/06 2:34 PM |
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CaseyGirl
Mommy to 3 Boys :)
Member since 5/05 19978 total posts
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Jen - counting my blessings...
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Posted by nov04libride
I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.
I would say something like
I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.
Ooops I already sent it. Here's what I wrote:
It was a pleasure meeting you this afternoon. I enjoyed learning more about(school) and the 2nd Grade position. I would also like to thank you for the tour; you have a beautiful school. It would be an honor to be a part of the (school) community.
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nov04libride
big brother <3
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
Posted by MrsTC
Posted by nov04libride
I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.
I would say something like
I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.
Ooops I already sent it. Here's what I wrote:
It was a pleasure meeting you this afternoon. I enjoyed learning more about(school) and the 2nd Grade position. I would also like to thank you for the tour; you have a beautiful school. It would be an honor to be a part of the (school) community.
Sounds good, good luck!
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| Posted 8/23/06 3:00 PM |
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nrthshgrl
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!
never mind
Message edited 8/23/2006 3:18:56 PM.
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