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Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

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Jessica
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~Jess~

Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

(For people that gave us money at our eparty.)

Words cannot express
the joy that we feel
knowing that you shared
our engagement celebration with us.

Thank you for your very generous gift. It was very much appreciated. (Can I personalize it a little more?)

******************************8

(For people that gave us a gift)
Words cannot express
the joy that we feel
knowing that you shared
our engagement celebration with us.

Thank you for your very thoughtful gift. We love the candlesticks and can't wait to use it on our dining room table in our future home together.


Any mistakes? Any suggestions or criticism?

Posted 9/18/06 8:00 PM
 
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Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

I like this better,......


Thanks for the $$, b*tches.


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Posted 9/18/06 8:01 PM
 

Jessica
I'm a mommy :)

Member since 1/06

7322 total posts

Name:
~Jess~

Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

Posted by KristenNYC

I like this better,......


Thanks for the $$, b*tches.


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Thats not nice you mean person!

Posted 9/18/06 8:01 PM
 

IGLover
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Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

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Posted 9/18/06 8:02 PM
 

mrsmck
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Name:
Donna

Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

How about:

Thank you very much for your gift. It is greatly appreciated.

or

We truly appreciate your generous gift.

good luck!

Posted 9/18/06 8:59 PM
 

johnsae
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Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

I'm confused...are you writing this out or having it printed on every card?? I am a firm beliver in writing a personalized thank you to each and every person...meaning that each note can be similar but slightly different.

Posted 9/18/06 9:01 PM
 

SweetestOfPeas
J'taime Paris!

Member since 3/06

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Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

"thank you so (or very) much for your generous gift! we will ________"

etiquette says that you should always tell them how you will use their gift.

Posted 9/18/06 9:03 PM
 

Jessica
I'm a mommy :)

Member since 1/06

7322 total posts

Name:
~Jess~

Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

Posted by johnsae

I'm confused...are you writing this out or having it printed on every card?? I am a firm beliver in writing a personalized thank you to each and every person...meaning that each note can be similar but slightly different.



writing them out. Wanted to know if my speling and grammar was correct.
Also personalizing by stating what we will do with each gift and a special part of how we enjoyed each indivdual person at the party.

Posted 9/18/06 9:03 PM
 

giggles
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Member since 5/05

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Name:
Colleen

Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

Posted by Jessica

(For people that gave us money at our eparty.)

Words cannot express
the joy that we feel
knowing that you shared
our engagement celebration with us.

Thank you for your very generous gift. It was very much appreciated. (Can I personalize it a little more?)

******************************8

(For people that gave us a gift)
Words cannot express
the joy that we feel
knowing that you shared
our engagement celebration with us.

Thank you for your very thoughtful gift. We love the candlesticks and can't wait to use it on our dining room table in our future home together.


Any mistakes? Any suggestions or criticism?



It should read: We love the candlesticks and we can't wait to use THEM on our dining room table.

Posted 9/18/06 9:38 PM
 

CrankyPants
I'm cranky

Member since 7/06

18178 total posts

Name:
Mama Cranky

Re: Thank you cards. (Grammar people please help).

Posted by giggles

Posted by Jessica

(For people that gave us money at our eparty.)

Words cannot express
the joy that we feel
knowing that you shared
our engagement celebration with us.

Thank you for your very generous gift. It was very much appreciated. (Can I personalize it a little more?)

******************************8

(For people that gave us a gift)
Words cannot express
the joy that we feel
knowing that you shared
our engagement celebration with us.

Thank you for your very thoughtful gift. We love the candlesticks and can't wait to use it on our dining room table in our future home together.


Any mistakes? Any suggestions or criticism?



It should read: We love the candlesticks and we can't wait to use THEM on our dining room table.



Also-you are not supposed to use contractions in written correspondence.

Posted 9/19/06 8:26 AM
 
 

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