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I need help with a poem

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Megan1129
LIF Adolescent

Member since 3/09

515 total posts

Name:
Megan

I need help with a poem

I'm MOH in a friends wedding in July. I am ordering Bridal shower invites today, and I am i also going to insert recipe cards. I'm trying to come up with a cute poem to order with the invites for the recipe card.

This is what I've got so far:

In order to help Crista become the perfect wife,
Give her your favorite recipes to try.
Write down the ingredients & tools, ie a knife,
Don't leave out the procedures, saute, bake or fry.
With your help she'll become quite the lil cook,
and there will never be a need for another cookbook.
Please bring the recipe with you that day,
In a recipe box they'll go and forever stay.

I'm a lil iffy about some of the lines.

Let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions. Thanks!!

Posted 4/3/09 11:10 AM
 

Tulips915
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Member since 8/08

6851 total posts

Name:
Me

Re: I need help with a poem

Found these online:

Enclosed for you is a recipe card.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
(Bride's name) might like to try your favorite cake,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on this special date.
Fill it in now, don't hesitate.
At the shower will be a recipe box to fill.
So bring this recipe card, if you will.


If its not too hard
Please find a card
For a recipe to share
So (Groom) can bear
Cooking from his wife
Whom he's entrusting with his life!


At the shower, there will be a recipe box to fill
So fill out and bring this cool recipe card.
Here is a recipe card just for you.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
____ might like to try your special cookies,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on her special date.
Fill it in now, don't be late.


Posted 4/3/09 11:15 AM
 

Megan1129
LIF Adolescent

Member since 3/09

515 total posts

Name:
Megan

Re: I need help with a poem

Posted by SB7308

Found these online:

Enclosed for you is a recipe card.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
(Bride's name) might like to try your favorite cake,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on this special date.
Fill it in now, don't hesitate.
At the shower will be a recipe box to fill.
So bring this recipe card, if you will.


If its not too hard
Please find a card
For a recipe to share
So (Groom) can bear
Cooking from his wife
Whom he's entrusting with his life!


At the shower, there will be a recipe box to fill
So fill out and bring this cool recipe card.
Here is a recipe card just for you.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
____ might like to try your special cookies,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on her special date.
Fill it in now, don't be late.





Thanks, I like the first poem

Posted 4/3/09 11:16 AM
 

MissRadiant
Happily Ever After

Member since 9/08

2534 total posts

Name:
N

Re: I need help with a poem

Posted by SB7308

Found these online:

Enclosed for you is a recipe card.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
(Bride's name) might like to try your favorite cake,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on this special date.
Fill it in now, don't hesitate.
At the shower will be a recipe box to fill.
So bring this recipe card, if you will.


If its not too hard
Please find a card
For a recipe to share
So (Groom) can bear
Cooking from his wife
Whom he's entrusting with his life!


At the shower, there will be a recipe box to fill
So fill out and bring this cool recipe card.
Here is a recipe card just for you.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
____ might like to try your special cookies,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on her special date.
Fill it in now, don't be late.





I really like the first one.

Posted 4/3/09 12:00 PM
 
 

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