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Jenn627
Laaaaaaaambert!
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Poem help - how does this read to you?
Join our little girl,
Jennifer Marie.
In her winter wonderland,
as she turns O-N-E.
Do you read the O-N-E as "one" or as "oh en ee"?
TIA!
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Posted 11/13/09 1:26 PM  |
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skinny
3 boys and a princess!
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
1! Sorry!
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| Posted 11/13/09 1:35 PM |
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neener1211
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
'one', but I would spell it ONE, instead of O-N-E. Looks odd that way.
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| Posted 11/13/09 1:43 PM |
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
Maybe if you have it on separate lines, like
As she turns
O
N
E
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No actually, after I typed it out I think that may be worse! 
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| Posted 11/13/09 1:44 PM |
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JP826
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
#1
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| Posted 11/13/09 1:51 PM |
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NinaLemon
It's a boy!!!
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Jeannine
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
I read it as 1 - and then when I realized it didn't rhyme went back and read it as "Oh En Ee"
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| Posted 11/13/09 1:54 PM |
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nrthshgrl
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
I read it as "one"
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| Posted 11/13/09 2:06 PM |
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Jenn627
Laaaaaaaambert!
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
Darn. Thanks everyone.
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| Posted 11/13/09 2:14 PM |
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skinny
3 boys and a princess!
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
Join our little girl,
Jennifer Marie.
She's turning one...
Come and see.
???
Sorry---I know u wanted to include the winter wonderland part---maybe the look of the invites will convey that?
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| Posted 11/13/09 2:25 PM |
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MeNBobs
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
Posted by Jenn627
Darn. Thanks everyone.
I read it o-n-e.
If you want it to rhyme can you change it up?
Make Marie rhyme with happy.
Join our little girl, Jennifer Marie.
In her winter wonderland,
help make her 1st birthday happy.
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| Posted 11/13/09 2:29 PM |
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
Are you making these yourself? Because I think you can force people to read ONE as letters if you have O, N, and E on separate signs, like if a penguin is holding up a sign. So have 3 penguins holding a sign each, one with O, one with N, one with E.
Here's an example of what I mean:
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| Posted 11/13/09 2:42 PM |
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Jenn627
Laaaaaaaambert!
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
It's for my SIL... She asked me for help. The best she could come up with was rhyming 'one' with 'fun'...
Thanks Catherine for the happy bit - I'll pass that along to her - see if we can brainstorm some more.
I see what you mean with the penguins - she's verrrrrrrry particular about invites - she wants it this whole pink snowflake theme so I don't know if she'll go for separating them like that. I know she's ordering from an invite lady and she's not into cutesy stuff... Personally - I think that would be adorable!
Thanks for the help!
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| Posted 11/13/09 2:48 PM |
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MeNBobs
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
BUMP- Anyone else 
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| Posted 11/13/09 2:57 PM |
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Jenn627
Laaaaaaaambert!
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Jenn
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
Posted by MeNBobs
BUMP- Anyone else
Buwahahahahahaha.  
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| Posted 11/13/09 3:56 PM |
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sunnygirl
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
i read it as oh en ee because of the dashes
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| Posted 11/13/09 4:04 PM |
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happytobreathe
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Re: Poem help - how does this read to you?
Posted by Jenn627
Join our little girl,
Jennifer Marie.
In her winter wonderland,
as she turns O-N-E.
Do you read the O-N-E as "one" or as "oh en ee"?
TIA!
I tried,...I kinda like it...
Our little girls 1st birthday will surely be grand,
Join us in our winter wonderland,
Celebrate with a walk in the 'snow and cold ',
As our little girl, Jennifer Marie, is turning one year old.
 
Message edited 11/13/2009 4:23:33 PM.
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