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luvsbob4603
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Luvsbob4603 poem thread
springtime
springtime comes around once a year
every flower blossoming far and near!
sounds of rain falling to the ground
listening to the wind blowing around.
Springtime is the most wonderful time of the year
Birds chirping... can you hear?
Beautiful, bright sunshine as it can be
Springtime is the best time of the year!
Forgiveness
Forgiveness is a piece of mind
even when you think it's not worth the time.
Forgiveness is something we all need
especially when it's hard to see!
even when someone breaks your trust apart.
forgiveness is what's in the heart
so even when you dont want to hear
remember forgiveness is what is dear
to everyone who is far or near.
Message edited 4/2/2007 5:55:50 PM.
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luvsbob4603
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Re: 2 new poems i think i already posted these but i did not see it in the search so here it is again enjoy
i added to the forgiveness poem.
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| Posted 3/31/07 6:28 PM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: 2 new poems i think i already posted these but i did not see it in the search so here it is again enjoy
Bumping
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| Posted 4/1/07 9:19 AM |
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bklyngirl
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Re: 2 new poems i think i already posted these but i did not see it in the search so here it is again enjoy
they're good ro
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| Posted 4/1/07 9:32 AM |
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JenniferEver
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Re: 2 new poems i think i already posted these but i did not see it in the search so here it is again enjoy
Very nice Ro!
You've really captured the essence of Springtime and what you say about Forgiveness is SO true. Keep at it!
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| Posted 4/1/07 9:36 AM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: 2 new poems i think i already posted these but i did not see it in the search so here it is again enjoy
Thank you ladies... i am trying to think of more than when i have enough pages i am definetely going to do that book i said. 
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| Posted 4/1/07 9:51 AM |
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luvsbob4603
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Luvsbob4603 poem thread
I changed one of my poems about marriage tell me what you think:
Marriage
Marriage is a commintment made by two
when you make your vows you know it's true
two people who become as one
two souls beat as one
Soulmates are what you become
two hearts beat as one
bestfriends which you both will be
forever in love shall you be
so remember when you took those vows
just know you should be proud
that the love you share
will alway's be with the one you care
The flame in your hearts
will not burn out until death do you part
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| Posted 4/2/07 5:54 PM |
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shell
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
There really good!!
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:02 PM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Posted by shell
There really good!!
Thank you.... someone at work told me they know of a publisher for magazines that do short poems and she is going to look into it for me because she thought they were really good!!!!
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:16 PM |
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shell
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
That is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:27 PM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
so if i do get them published in a magazine you can all say you know me.... lol.. i wish i could get money for it but i dont know if you can get money for putting your poems in a magazine as to publishing a book.
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:29 PM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
I also wrote one about lif 
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:30 PM |
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shell
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Posted by luvsbob4603
so if i do get them published in a magazine you can all say you know me.... lol.. i wish i could get money for it but i dont know if you can get money for putting your poems in a magazine as to publishing a book.
I think you can get money for it. It's your work.
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:31 PM |
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shell
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Posted by luvsbob4603
I also wrote one about lif
Did you post that one?
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:31 PM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Here it is... i hope you like it
LIF
Lif is a website made of people
who live far and near
some friendships is what is made on here
with those who are close and dear
sometimes people can be a drear
and Ignore those who they dont want to be near
So never fear
because no matter what we feel
that we all love each other
in our hearts far or near
ron and liz
is a very important part
because without them
this website would never be apart of us and they will alway's be in our hearts.
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| Posted 4/2/07 6:41 PM |
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shell
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Posted by luvsbob4603
Here it is... i hope you like it
LIF
Lif is a website made of people
who live far and near
some friendships is what is made on here
with those who are close and dear
sometimes people can be a drear
and Ignore those who they dont want to be near
So never fear
because no matter what we feel
that we all love each other
in our hearts far or near
ron and liz
is a very important part
because without them
this website would never be apart of us and they will alway's be in our hearts.
Awww...It's so good!!!
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:25 PM |
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pinky
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
those are great! you are very talented. i couldn't write a poem to save my life.
love the lif one
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:26 PM |
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Libragal07
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
now thats some magical poems 
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:39 PM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Thank you ladies.
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:40 PM |
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Libragal07
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
just curious....
how long does it take you to write one of these poems?
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:45 PM |
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LisaW
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
What is drear? Is that a typo? 
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:49 PM |
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Libragal07
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Posted by LisaW
What is drear? Is that a typo?
I wasn't sure so I did a search....
drear
causing dejection; "a blue day"; "the dark days of the war"; "a week of rainy depressing weather"; "a disconsolate winter landscape"; "the first dismal dispiriting days of November"; "a dark gloomy day"; "grim rainy weather"
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:52 PM |
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luvsbob4603
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Posted by Libragal07
just curious....
how long does it take you to write one of these poems?
Depends... sometimes a half hour or 20 minutes, it all varies it can also take me a hour it just pops in my head and i just write them down.
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| Posted 4/2/07 7:54 PM |
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CowgirlChick97
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
i got one
beans beans good for the heart
the more you eat the more you
fart
yeaaaaaaaa im not a good poet
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| Posted 4/2/07 8:03 PM |
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Libragal07
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Re: Luvsbob4603 poem thread
Posted by Syliblond81106
i got one
beans beans good for the heart
the more you eat the more you
fart
yeaaaaaaaa im not a good poet
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| Posted 4/2/07 8:04 PM |
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