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I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good

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luvsbob4603
To a healthy 2013

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To a brand new year to a healthier me

I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good

I want your honest opinions i was playing around with this poem and i would like your honest opinions thanks.. Here it goes

Forgiveness

Forgivess is a peace of mind
even when you think it's not worth the time

forgiveness is something we all need
especiallywhen it's hard to see

even when someone breaks your trust apart

forgiveness is what is in the heart

Posted 3/26/07 11:21 PM
 
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Re: I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good

I love it!
Just Beautiful RoChat Icon

Posted 3/26/07 11:23 PM
 

luvsbob4603
To a healthy 2013

Member since 5/05

21840 total posts

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To a brand new year to a healthier me

Re: I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good

Thank you!!!!Chat Icon

Posted 3/26/07 11:24 PM
 
 

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