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patti08
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Please help with wording for holiday card
I have a great pic of DD looking at the tree and want to say something like:
"Wishing you the wonder and joy of seeing the holiday season for the first time."
Any suggestions on a better or more eloquent way to convey that?
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GoldenRod
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
That's pretty good, IMO. I would probably stick with that. 
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| Posted 12/1/07 4:54 PM |
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nrthshgrl
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
I agree. I think you nailed it.
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| Posted 12/1/07 4:57 PM |
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nbc188
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
Perfect as is. Great wording!
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| Posted 12/1/07 8:07 PM |
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
I love it but I might changing seeing to experiencing. JMO 
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| Posted 12/1/07 8:55 PM |
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CookiePuss
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
Posted by Mrs. Patticakes
I love it but I might changing seeing to experiencing. JMO
I agree.
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| Posted 12/1/07 8:59 PM |
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Lucky
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
Posted by Mrs. Patticakes
I love it but I might changing seeing to experiencing. JMO
I agree with this suggestion.
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| Posted 12/1/07 8:59 PM |
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ml110
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
what about something like " may this holiday season bring you childlike wonder and joy" ??
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| Posted 12/1/07 9:12 PM |
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InShock
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
Posted by patti08
I have a great pic of DD looking at the tree and want to say something like:
"Wishing you the wonder and joy of seeing the holiday season for the first time."
Any suggestions on a better or more eloquent way to convey that?
I agree it could be more 'eloquent' -- what about something like:
"Wishing you the wonder and joy of your first holiday season" ...... or something like that
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| Posted 12/1/07 9:33 PM |
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
Posted by InShock
"Wishing you the wonder and joy of your first holiday season" ...... or something like that
That's it!!! 
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| Posted 12/1/07 9:42 PM |
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waterspout4
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Re: Please help with wording for holiday card
Ooh!! I like the suggestions and your original!! I want to see the pic!!!
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| Posted 12/1/07 11:48 PM |
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