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Tine73
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Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
I know, huge dilemma. Please humor me! Both will be centered.
Option #1
Come Hang Out, We’ll run, skip & play It’s time to celebrate My Birthday!
Meet us at Gymboree at The Source Mall for
Elizabeth’s 2nd Birthday!
Date Time RSVP byx xxx [email protected] or 516-xxx-xxxx
Option #2
Please come to my Birthday Party I'm going to be 2! It will really be special, If I share it with YOU!
Elizabeth’s 2nd Birthday!
Gymboree at The Source Mall Date Time
RSVP by xxx [email protected] or 516-xxx-xxxx
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Posted 9/15/09 9:26 PM |
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Bops
My 3 wishes
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
Love #2 !!!!!
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Posted 9/15/09 9:27 PM |
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jellybean78
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
#2
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Posted 9/15/09 9:33 PM |
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Katie111806
Team Pink!
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
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Posted 9/15/09 9:37 PM |
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ckone
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
I like them both to be honest. I chose #2 because it makes people feel special. #1 is super cute though. I would like to receive either.
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Posted 9/15/09 9:37 PM |
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CaMacho
Sisters :)
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
I like #2 better, but instead maybe make the first part two lines...
instead of:
Please come to my Birthday Party I'm going to be 2!
Maybe write:
It's my Birthday and I'm going to be TWO!
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Posted 9/15/09 9:54 PM |
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Ang-Rich
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
I like #2 - I don't like that these kids are getting so big so fast
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Posted 9/15/09 10:14 PM |
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2PreciousBlessings
The Perfect Pair
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
#2
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Posted 9/16/09 6:09 AM |
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littlejoy06
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
#2 So cute!!
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Posted 9/16/09 7:42 AM |
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nbc188
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.
ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.
Message edited 9/16/2009 9:17:53 AM.
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Posted 9/16/09 9:08 AM |
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Metsmomma
Happy Winter!
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
wow i'm the minority too! i love #1!!!
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Posted 9/16/09 9:16 AM |
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kahlua716
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
Posted by CaMacho
I like #2 better, but instead maybe make the first part two lines...
instead of:
Please come to my Birthday Party I'm going to be 2!
Maybe write:
It's my Birthday and I'm going to be TWO!
I agree.
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Posted 9/16/09 9:31 AM |
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debsey75
My two best friends!
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
love #2. Very cute!
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Posted 9/16/09 10:49 AM |
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nrthshgrl
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
I love #2, but would take out the word "really".
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Posted 9/16/09 10:51 AM |
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nrthshgrl
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
Posted by nbc188
I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.
ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.
The reason #1 isn't my top choice is the come hang out part doesn't seem birthday party-ish
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Posted 9/16/09 10:52 AM |
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cgdg61606
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
#2
We used:
The word is out, yes it’s true!
Our sweet little boy is turning two!
Join us is celebrating Thomas’ birthday!
Message edited 9/16/2009 11:03:45 AM.
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Posted 9/16/09 10:58 AM |
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twinkletoes807
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
Posted by nbc188
I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.
ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.
ITA! #1 is my fave!
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Posted 9/16/09 11:37 AM |
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Superkat
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
Posted by nbc188
I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.
ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.
Same here!
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Posted 9/16/09 11:51 AM |
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junebride06
love my boys!
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
#2
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Posted 9/16/09 1:14 PM |
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nadia
My two Girls=)
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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?
I like #2 better
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Posted 9/16/09 1:54 PM |
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