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Which Wording?

Forum Opinion Poll
Option 1 9 16.98%
Option 2 44 83.02%
If you have a better one, please list it! 0 0.00%
 

Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

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Tine73

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Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

I know, huge dilemma. Please humor me! Both will be centered.

Option #1

Come Hang Out,
We’ll run, skip & play
It’s time to celebrate
My Birthday!

Meet us at
Gymboree at The Source Mall
for

Elizabeth’s
2nd Birthday!

Date
Time
RSVP byx xxx
[email protected] or 516-xxx-xxxx

Option #2

Please come to
my Birthday Party
I'm going to be 2!
It will really be special,
If I share it with YOU!

Elizabeth’s
2nd Birthday!

Gymboree at The Source Mall
Date
Time

RSVP by xxx
[email protected] or 516-xxx-xxxx

Posted 9/15/09 9:26 PM
 

Bops
My 3 wishes

Member since 12/07

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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

Love #2 Chat Icon !!!!!

Posted 9/15/09 9:27 PM
 

jellybean78
:)

Member since 8/06

13103 total posts

Name:
Mommy

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

#2

Posted 9/15/09 9:33 PM
 

Katie111806
Team Pink!

Member since 12/06

5349 total posts

Name:
Katie

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

2

Posted 9/15/09 9:37 PM
 

ckone
LIF Adult

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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

I like them both to be honest. I chose #2 because it makes people feel special. #1 is super cute though. I would like to receive either.

Posted 9/15/09 9:37 PM
 

CaMacho
Sisters :)

Member since 7/06

15112 total posts

Name:
Jess

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

I like #2 better, but instead maybe make the first part two lines...

instead of:

Please come to
my Birthday Party
I'm going to be 2!


Maybe write:

It's my Birthday and
I'm going to be TWO!

Posted 9/15/09 9:54 PM
 

Ang-Rich
Beyond Compare

Member since 5/05

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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

I like #2 - I don't like that these kids are getting so big so fast Chat Icon

Posted 9/15/09 10:14 PM
 

2PreciousBlessings
The Perfect Pair

Member since 5/06

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Best Wife & Mommy

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

#2

Posted 9/16/09 6:09 AM
 

littlejoy06
Love

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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

#2 So cute!!

Posted 9/16/09 7:42 AM
 

nbc188
Best friends!

Member since 12/06

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C

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.

ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.

Message edited 9/16/2009 9:17:53 AM.

Posted 9/16/09 9:08 AM
 

Metsmomma
Happy Winter!

Member since 1/09

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Renee

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

wow i'm the minority too! i love #1!!!

Posted 9/16/09 9:16 AM
 

kahlua716
3 Girls for Me!

Member since 8/07

12475 total posts

Name:
Keri

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

Posted by CaMacho

I like #2 better, but instead maybe make the first part two lines...

instead of:

Please come to
my Birthday Party
I'm going to be 2!


Maybe write:

It's my Birthday and
I'm going to be TWO!



I agree.

Posted 9/16/09 9:31 AM
 

debsey75
My two best friends!

Member since 11/06

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Debbie

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

love #2. Very cute!

Posted 9/16/09 10:49 AM
 

nrthshgrl
It goes fast. Pay attention.

Member since 7/05

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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

I love #2, but would take out the word "really".

Posted 9/16/09 10:51 AM
 

nrthshgrl
It goes fast. Pay attention.

Member since 7/05

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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

Posted by nbc188

I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.

ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.



The reason #1 isn't my top choice is the come hang out part doesn't seem birthday party-ish

Posted 9/16/09 10:52 AM
 

cgdg61606
Little Brother Christopher

Member since 2/07

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Christine

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

#2

Chat Icon

We used:

The word is out, yes it’s true!

Our sweet little boy is turning two!

Join us is celebrating Thomas’ birthday!

Message edited 9/16/2009 11:03:45 AM.

Posted 9/16/09 10:58 AM
 

twinkletoes807
Mommy's Girls! ♥

Member since 11/07

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Gabi

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

Posted by nbc188

I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.

ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.



ITA! #1 is my fave! Chat Icon

Posted 9/16/09 11:37 AM
 

Superkat
More a stranger than a friend

Member since 5/06

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Name:
K

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

Posted by nbc188

I’m clearly in the minority but I really like #1.

ETA: I really like #1 b/c it fits the type of party it is too-- they'll be running, skipping, etc. at Gymboree.



Same here!

Posted 9/16/09 11:51 AM
 

junebride06
love my boys!

Member since 2/08

3181 total posts

Name:
Robin

Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

#2 Chat Icon

Posted 9/16/09 1:14 PM
 

nadia
My two Girls=)

Member since 7/07

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Re: Whic B-day Invite Wording Do You Like Better?

I like #2 betterChat Icon

Posted 9/16/09 1:54 PM
 
 

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