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IrishTracy
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Member since 5/05

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Name:
Tracy

Wording Help

I'm making a Mothers day card for my MIL (In Ireland Mother's Day is the end of March (WHY I have no clue) Any who......

Does this sound right?

To the best Granny in the world! No matter how far away you are. You are always close in our hearts. We hope you have a great Mother's Day. We Love you!!

Posted 3/13/06 2:34 PM
 
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LadyMaravilla
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Name:
Sonia

Re: Wording Help

Posted by IrishTracy

I'm making a Mothers day card for my MIL (In Ireland Mother's Day is the end of March (WHY I have no clue) Any who......

Does this sound right?

To the best Granny in the world! No matter how far away you are. You are always close in our hearts. We hope you have a great Mother's Day. We Love you!!



I would say: You are always close to "our" hearts.

Posted 3/13/06 2:38 PM
 

Cheryl
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Member since 5/05

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Name:
Mikey, Greg & TJ's Mommy

Re: Wording Help

Posted by IrishTracy

I'm making a Mothers day card for my MIL (In Ireland Mother's Day is the end of March (WHY I have no clue) Any who......

Does this sound right?

To the best Granny in the world! No matter how far away you are. You are always close in our hearts. We hope you have a great Mother's Day. We Love you!!



Sounds Terrific!
I would take out the period after are in the second sentence and make it a dash. Make the Y in you lower case-- so it reads:
"No matter how far away you are- you are always close in our hearts."

Then you are all set!

Posted 3/13/06 2:38 PM
 
 

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