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MyChip-n-Dales
lifes many lil twisted curves
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aeriell
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birthday invite... what do yiou think??? updated with corrections..
any and all feedback appreciated...
thanks!!!!
made corrections....
anymore???
thanks ladies for all the suggestions... keep em coming!! 
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HillW9608
Hello Summer!
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Hill
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
I think its great.. the only thing is that you cant see the "turning one" that well.. other than that its adorable!!
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| Posted 7/20/08 11:29 PM |
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ABCiverson
<3 my family
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Amanda
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
I LOVE it! The only thing I see that needs fixed is the cut out picture needs the lines (around his shorts and legs) cleaned up alittle! What a great invite!
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| Posted 7/20/08 11:30 PM |
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nrthshgrl
It goes fast. Pay attention.
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
I would put fun on the first line...and make the whole thing a two line intro.
Also for Caden James, I would probably put a glow around it to make it easier to distinguish from teh cowboys logo.
Great job!
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| Posted 7/20/08 11:43 PM |
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waterspout4
My loves
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Kelly
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
If it were the Giants, it would be perfect!!!!!  (I know Heather is waiting for my comment, so I put it out there.)
It is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
I would clean up the lines around his legs.
You are the queen!!!!!!
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| Posted 7/20/08 11:50 PM |
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ladolcevita
LIF Infant
Member since 6/08 286 total posts
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TA
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
love it!
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| Posted 7/20/08 11:52 PM |
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CunningOne
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
Very nice! What talent! And what a cute subject!! I agree with the other ladies comments!
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| Posted 7/21/08 12:11 AM |
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
I love it, love it, love it.
I was actually going to say I am not crazy about the idea of saying, "the place the party is." Yeah, then I realized that is not going on the actual invite.
Looks great.
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| Posted 7/21/08 12:49 AM |
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sunny
Life is good!
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Stephanie
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
I love it!
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| Posted 7/21/08 1:28 AM |
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want2beamom
Love my boys soooo much!!!
Member since 8/06 10164 total posts
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True love doesn't end with happily ever after...
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
Is it supposed to say Caden James' First Birthday, as if you were saying Rob's First Birthday? If so, dont for the '
I love it by the way!
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| Posted 7/21/08 8:15 AM |
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JenBenMen
party of five
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Jen
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
i love it!!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 8:19 AM |
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Ang-Rich
Beyond Compare
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
What a cute theme!! I love how the pics are all of Caden wearing his Cowboy gear!
I agree with the suggestions posted so far:
Move the word 'fun' up to the first sentence and then bring that second phrase up a line.
Would you consider moving the rest of the text down so nothing overlaps the Cowboy logo?
But seriously - great job!!!
Caden is gorgeous - I can't believe how much he has grown  those pictures say it all!!!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 8:30 AM |
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tiki03
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
I love it. Especially since I am a Cowboy fan myself Great job!
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| Posted 7/21/08 8:31 AM |
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MyChip-n-Dales
lifes many lil twisted curves
Member since 10/07 5158 total posts
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aeriell
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
Posted by nrthshgrl
I would put fun on the first line...and make the whole thing a two line intro.
Also for Caden James, I would probably put a glow around it to make it easier to distinguish from teh cowboys logo.
Great job!
Thank you!
i was actually waiting for you to come on!
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| Posted 7/21/08 8:49 AM |
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MyChip-n-Dales
lifes many lil twisted curves
Member since 10/07 5158 total posts
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aeriell
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
Posted by want2beamom
Is it supposed to say Caden James' First Birthday, as if you were saying Rob's First Birthday? If so, dont for the '
I love it by the way!
yes!! i wasnt sure how to make it possesive... fig one of my english teachers would be out!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 8:50 AM |
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lulugrrl
My 3 Blessings
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
oh, I LOVE this!!!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 8:55 AM |
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elyssa222
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
the second one looks much better. Great job
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| Posted 7/21/08 9:02 AM |
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
Great job!!!!!!!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 9:20 AM |
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juanvi
Get Out!
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Christina
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
awesome!
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| Posted 7/21/08 9:24 AM |
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Melbernai
I am a lucky Momma!
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Melissa
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think???
that looks fantastic!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 9:27 AM |
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nrthshgrl
It goes fast. Pay attention.
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think??? updated with corrections..
I love it! The corrections look terrific. One more thing I didn't catch but you may want to try is to move the santa hat down to fill that empty space a little bit.
Very creative!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 10:03 AM |
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think??? updated with corrections..
Posted by twinboys425
Posted by want2beamom
Is it supposed to say Caden James' First Birthday, as if you were saying Rob's First Birthday? If so, dont for the '
I love it by the way!
yes!! i wasnt sure how to make it possesive... fig one of my english teachers would be out!!
The traditional rule is that it should be James's but it is becoming more common and acceptable to just say James'
from--- English major who almost became an English teacher
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| Posted 7/21/08 10:06 AM |
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wynter323
Couple more days.
Member since 7/07 1319 total posts
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Jennifer
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think??? updated with corrections..
I think it looks great.
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| Posted 7/21/08 10:31 AM |
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hbugal
Lesigh
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think??? updated with corrections..
Posted by Kerie-is-so-very
I love it, love it, love it.
I was actually going to say I am not crazy about the idea of saying, "the place the party is." Yeah, then I realized that is not going on the actual invite.
Looks great.
DUH!!!!!!!
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| Posted 7/21/08 9:18 PM |
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dooodles
When you wish upon a star
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Because 2 people fell in love
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Re: birthday invite... what do yiou think??? updated with corrections..
Just beautiful!!! You really outdid yourself with this one!
And the pictures used are so adorable 
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