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july0105
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Birthday party invitation opinions
I was wondering if anyone has any suggestions for improvement for me... also, which picture do you like best?
Thanks!
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Posted 2/17/10 12:30 PM  |
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Angel321
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
first of all - GREAT job!!!!
i LOVE the first pic - but i'd change the coloring of the info/lettering on the bottom - maybe go to red??
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| Posted 2/17/10 12:32 PM |
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eroxgirl
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
Posted by davenjess
first of all - GREAT job!!!!
i LOVE the first pic - but i'd change the coloring of the info/lettering on the bottom - maybe go to red??
ITA but I might try white because it will stand out more. My DH says I use white too often though, so try both and see which works.
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| Posted 2/17/10 12:36 PM |
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july0105
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
Posted by eroxgirl
Posted by davenjess
first of all - GREAT job!!!!
i LOVE the first pic - but i'd change the coloring of the info/lettering on the bottom - maybe go to red??
ITA but I might try white because it will stand out more. My DH says I use white too often though, so try both and see which works.
Thanks for your input. I will give it a try
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| Posted 2/17/10 12:38 PM |
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nov06
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
So cute! I agree with the OP's.
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| Posted 2/17/10 12:54 PM |
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BnBdreamin
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
Both are really cute! I do like the first one, especially if you do the phone pic for the thank you notes.
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| Posted 2/17/10 1:07 PM |
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nrthshgrl
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
I think the #1 photo because the focus is more on him, versus me looking at his sippy cup & the stairs.
I would fade out the 2 more so it's more of the background.
I'd also center the info (unless you've blanked out the address?) and maybe use a pear or an apple ala the hungry caterpillar as separators.
I think white on the wording on the bottle (not the Jake Robert, I think that!) should be white too.
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| Posted 2/17/10 1:07 PM |
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july0105
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
Posted by nrthshgrl
I think the #1 photo because the focus is more on him, versus me looking at his sippy cup & the stairs.
I would fade out the 2 more so it's more of the background.
I'd also center the info (unless you've blanked out the address?) and maybe use a pear or an apple ala the hungry caterpillar as separators.
I think white on the wording on the bottle (not the Jake Robert, I think that!) should be white too.
Thanks for the suggestions. I hope you don't mind me using the photoshop challenge card you sent out. I really like the layout!
What do you think now...
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| Posted 2/18/10 1:08 PM |
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MrsS518
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
great job! love the 1st one
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| Posted 2/18/10 1:11 PM |
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babyonthebrain
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
OMG the first invitation is adorable!!! Love that pic!!
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| Posted 2/18/10 2:21 PM |
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nrthshgrl
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
I like the white writing much better.
Do you have the street address after Jake's House or is that space intentional after it?
If it is, I'd make his name larger.
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| Posted 2/18/10 2:36 PM |
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july0105
My three little miracles
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
I can't stop... does anyone like this one better?
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| Posted 2/18/10 3:39 PM |
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july0105
My three little miracles
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Re: Birthday party invitation opinions
Posted by nrthshgrl
I like the white writing much better.
Do you have the street address after Jake's House or is that space intentional after it?
If it is, I'd make his name larger.
Thanks.
I tried making "Jake Robert" bigger, but I didn't like it because it extended past his picture. It was a "symmetry" thing for me.
Thanks for the suggestions, though! I really appreciate it
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| Posted 2/18/10 3:41 PM |
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