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Need grammar help ASAP!!!

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CaseyGirl
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Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Ending a sentence with a preposition, such as:

You have a beautiful school that I would love to be a part of.


How can I rephrase this!!??

Posted 8/23/06 2:25 PM
 
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twobabies
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

I would love to be part of your beautiful school.

Posted 8/23/06 2:26 PM
 

LadyMaravilla
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Posted by MrsTC

Ending a sentence with a preposition, such as:

You have a beautiful school that I would love to be a part of.


How can I rephrase this!!??



I would love to be part of the beautiful school you have.

Posted 8/23/06 2:26 PM
 

MrsPorkChop
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!


I would love to be a pert of your beautiful school
or
It would be an honor to be a member of your beautiful school community.

Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM
 

CC0203
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Posted by twobabies

I would love to be part of your beautiful school.



I agree Chat Icon

Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM
 

Goldi0218
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Posted by MrsTC
You have a beautiful school that I would love to be a part of.



I would enjoy the opportunity to be a part of your wonderful program (school, etc.)

Message edited 8/23/2006 2:29:12 PM.

Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM
 

CaseyGirl
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Jen - counting my blessings...

Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

thanks!!! Chat Icon

Posted 8/23/06 2:27 PM
 

nov04libride
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.

I would say something like

I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.

Posted 8/23/06 2:28 PM
 

Goldi0218
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Posted by nov04libride

I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.

I would say something like

I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.



That is exactly why I wrote what I wrote.

Posted 8/23/06 2:29 PM
 

Crismicka
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Posted by twobabies

I would love to be part of your beautiful school.



yes

Posted 8/23/06 2:34 PM
 

CaseyGirl
Mommy to 3 Boys :)

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Jen - counting my blessings...

Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Posted by nov04libride

I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.

I would say something like

I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.




Ooops I already sent it. Here's what I wrote:

It was a pleasure meeting you this afternoon. I enjoyed learning more about(school) and the 2nd Grade position. I would also like to thank you for the tour; you have a beautiful school. It would be an honor to be a part of the (school) community.

Posted 8/23/06 2:51 PM
 

nov04libride
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Me

Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

Posted by MrsTC

Posted by nov04libride

I wouldn't even use that sentence. Beautiful school sounds like it is pretty, and in that sentence you technically want to become a part of the physical building.

I would say something like

I am impressed with the tight-knit school community and believe I would be an asset to your staff because of my background and teaching experience.




Ooops I already sent it. Here's what I wrote:

It was a pleasure meeting you this afternoon. I enjoyed learning more about(school) and the 2nd Grade position. I would also like to thank you for the tour; you have a beautiful school. It would be an honor to be a part of the (school) community.



Sounds good, good luck!

Posted 8/23/06 3:00 PM
 

nrthshgrl
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Re: Need grammar help ASAP!!!

never mindChat Icon

Message edited 8/23/2006 3:18:56 PM.

Posted 8/23/06 3:18 PM
 
 

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