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Grammar experts..
Quick question about how to word an invite :
What is the proper way of writing the following?
RSVP to Joe at: [email protected] or text to: (123) 555-5555
And if you have reasons, please add them!
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Posted 3/3/20 7:44 PM |
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klingklang77
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Re: Grammar experts..
That’s a tough one and people tend to disagree on colon usage.
A colon should be used after a full sentence, which you have in both examples (in the imperative form).
But a colon should also be used to introduce a list or to introduce a point you want to stand out (‘i.e.’ for formal writing or ‘that is’).
Since you only have one item, I would omit the colon in both places. But my answer is based on the fact that I don’t really understand your exact question. Therefore, I’ve answered the colon part because the colon is used incorrectly. Be a bit more specific please.
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Or are you looking for comma usage within the whole sentence? If you take away the colons and you want to use both phrases, then you need a comma before ‘or.’
Message edited 3/3/2020 9:11:13 PM.
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Posted 3/3/20 9:08 PM |
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Re: Grammar experts..
Posted by klingklang77
That’s a tough one and people tend to disagree on colon usage.
A colon should be used after a full sentence, which you have in both examples (in the imperative form).
But a colon should also be used to introduce a list or to introduce a point you want to stand out (‘i.e.’ for formal writing or ‘that is’).
Since you only have one item, I would omit the colon in both places. But my answer is based on the fact that I don’t really understand your exact question. Therefore, I’ve answered the colon part because the colon is used incorrectly. Be a bit more specific please.
ETA:
Or are you looking for comma usage within the whole sentence? If you take away the colons and you want to use both phrases, then you need a comma before ‘or.’
My mother wants to send out the the information as I wrote it, but it looks “off.”
I thought of removing both colons as well, but I’ve also never been partial to using them.
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Posted 3/3/20 9:47 PM |
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Dreamer27
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Re: Grammar experts..
RSVP to [email protected] or text 123-555-5555
This avoids unnecessary punctuation and redundancies. But I’d also add an RSVP deadline after the phone number.
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Posted 3/3/20 10:42 PM |
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LIRascal
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Member since 3/11 7287 total posts
Name: Michelle
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Re: Grammar experts..
By omitting the word “at”, you won’t need colons. It is implied that one would RSVP in these two ways, so there’s no need to explain further. I hope it helps!
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Posted 3/3/20 10:55 PM |
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